【闲聊诗词】（十）七绝旧作供参考

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<P align=center><FONT color=white size=4>（旧帖重发，仅供朋友加深对七绝的印象用）<BR></FONT></P><FONT color=lime size=7 face=楷体,楷体_GB2312>
<P align=center><STRONG>七绝《咏唐昭陵六骏》<BR></STRONG><FONT size=5><FONT color=white>扬州爱莲闲人甲午立春后三日依韵涂鸦<BR></FONT><IMG style="MAX-WIDTH: 400px" border=0 src="http://www.keai99.com/data/attachment/forum/201311/13/161231bbcmtylgp0ttoytb.gif"></FONT></P><FONT face=楷体,楷体_GB2312><FONT color=yellow><FONT size=5><STRONG><FONT color=cyan size=6 face=楷体,楷体_GB2312>六 骏 之 飒 露 紫<BR></FONT></STRONG>（首句平起入平韵式）<BR><BR><FONT color=white size=6 face=宋体><STRONG>中原逐鹿我为先，热血横流勇向前；<BR>气御三川扶正义，威凌八阵祭苍天。<BR><BR></STRONG></FONT><BR></FONT></FONT></FONT>
<P align=center><FONT size=5><IMG style="MAX-WIDTH: 400px" border=0 src="http://www.keai99.com/data/attachment/forum/201311/13/161231bbcmtylgp0ttoytb.gif"><BR></FONT><FONT color=cyan size=6 face=楷体,楷体_GB2312><STRONG>六 骏 之 什 伐 赤</STRONG></FONT></P>
<P align=center><FONT size=5><FONT color=yellow face=楷体,楷体_GB2312>（首句平起不入平韵式）<BR><BR><FONT color=white size=6 face=宋体><STRONG>电光一道冲天怒，骋足千回动地哀；<BR>到此唐王心事定，江山社稷落尘埃。<BR><BR></STRONG></FONT><BR></FONT><IMG style="MAX-WIDTH: 400px" border=0 src="http://www.keai99.com/data/attachment/forum/201311/13/161231bbcmtylgp0ttoytb.gif"><BR><FONT color=yellow face=宋体><FONT face=楷体,楷体_GB2312><STRONG><FONT color=cyan size=6 face=楷体,楷体_GB2312>六 骏 之 白 蹄 乌<BR></FONT></STRONG>（首句仄起入平韵式）<BR><BR><STRONG><SPAN style="WIDOWS: 2; TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; DISPLAY: inline !important; FONT: 14px/22px Arial; WHITE-SPACE: normal; ORPHANS: 2; FLOAT: none; LETTER-SPACING: normal; COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; font-size-adjust: none; font-stretch: normal"><BR><FONT color=white size=6 face=宋体><STRONG>耸辔平凉意若何，</STRONG></FONT></SPAN><FONT face=宋体><STRONG><FONT color=white><FONT size=6><SPAN style="WIDOWS: 2; TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; DISPLAY: inline !important; FONT: 14px/22px Arial; WHITE-SPACE: normal; ORPHANS: 2; FLOAT: none; LETTER-SPACING: normal; COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; font-size-adjust: none; font-stretch: normal"><FONT size=6 face=宋体><STRONG><FONT color=white>回鞍定蜀事无多；</FONT><BR></STRONG></FONT></SPAN><BR style="WIDOWS: 2; TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; FONT: 14px/22px Arial; WHITE-SPACE: normal; ORPHANS: 2; LETTER-SPACING: normal; COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; font-size-adjust: none; font-stretch: normal"></FONT><FONT size=6><FONT face=宋体><SPAN style="WIDOWS: 2; TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; DISPLAY: inline !important; FONT: 14px/22px Arial; WHITE-SPACE: normal; ORPHANS: 2; FLOAT: none; LETTER-SPACING: normal; COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; font-size-adjust: none; font-stretch: normal"><FONT color=white size=6 face=宋体><STRONG>追风已服中原寇，</STRONG></FONT></SPAN></FONT></FONT></FONT></STRONG></FONT><FONT color=white size=6 face=宋体><SPAN style="WIDOWS: 2; TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; DISPLAY: inline !important; FONT: 14px/22px Arial; WHITE-SPACE: normal; ORPHANS: 2; FLOAT: none; LETTER-SPACING: normal; COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; font-size-adjust: none; font-stretch: normal"><STRONG><FONT color=white size=6 face=宋体>跨海当收外岛倭。<BR><BR></FONT></STRONG></SPAN></FONT></STRONG><BR></FONT><BR></FONT><IMG style="MAX-WIDTH: 400px" border=0 src="http://www.keai99.com/data/attachment/forum/201311/13/161231bbcmtylgp0ttoytb.gif"><BR></FONT><FONT size=5><FONT color=yellow face=楷体,楷体_GB2312><FONT color=cyan size=6 face=楷体,楷体_GB2312><STRONG>六 骏 之 青&nbsp;骓<BR></STRONG></FONT>（首句仄起不入平韵式）<BR><BR><FONT color=white size=6 face=宋体><STRONG>不向军槽图享乐，偏生桀骜展雄威；<BR>扬蹄破虏沙场疾，踏血平顽草上飞。<BR></STRONG></FONT><BR><BR></FONT><IMG style="MAX-WIDTH: 400px" border=0 src="http://www.keai99.com/data/attachment/forum/201311/13/161231bbcmtylgp0ttoytb.gif"><BR></FONT><FONT color=cyan size=6 face=楷体,楷体_GB2312><STRONG>六 骏 之 特 勒 骠</STRONG></FONT></P></FONT>
<P align=center><FONT face=宋体><SPAN style="WIDOWS: 2; TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; FONT-VARIANT: normal; FONT-STYLE: normal; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; FONT-FAMILY: Simsun; WHITE-SPACE: normal; ORPHANS: 2; LETTER-SPACING: normal; COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-SIZE: 18px; FONT-WEIGHT: bold; WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><FONT color=yellow><FONT size=5 face=楷体,楷体_GB2312>（首句平起入仄韵式）<BR><BR><FONT color=white size=6 face=宋体>迎风笑傲斜阳委，溅血欣然秋月紫；<BR>铁甲三千凭纵横，旌旗十万任披靡。</FONT></FONT></FONT></SPAN></FONT><FONT face=宋体><SPAN style="WIDOWS: 2; TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; FONT-VARIANT: normal; FONT-STYLE: normal; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; FONT-FAMILY: Simsun; WHITE-SPACE: normal; ORPHANS: 2; LETTER-SPACING: normal; COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-SIZE: 18px; FONT-WEIGHT: bold; WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><FONT color=yellow><FONT size=5 face=楷体,楷体_GB2312><BR><BR><BR></FONT><IMG style="MAX-WIDTH: 400px" border=0 src="http://www.keai99.com/data/attachment/forum/201311/13/161231bbcmtylgp0ttoytb.gif"><BR><FONT color=yellow size=5 face=楷体,楷体_GB2312><FONT color=cyan size=6 face=楷体,楷体_GB2312>六 骏 之 拳 毛 騧<BR></FONT>（首句仄起不入仄韵式）<BR><BR><FONT color=white size=6 face=宋体>莫问英雄身出处，成王败寇谁千古？<BR>升仙得道后人评，夕照晨辉随我舞。<BR></FONT><BR><BR></FONT><BR><IMG style="MAX-WIDTH: 400px" border=0 src="http://www.keai99.com/data/attachment/album/201109/02/140916uhjuvlwjjtlpwjwe.gif"><BR><BR><FONT color=yellow size=6>七言绝句（平仄定格）<BR></FONT><FONT color=cyan face=黑体><BR><FONT size=5>[平韵七绝四式]<BR></FONT></FONT></FONT></SPAN></FONT><FONT color=yellow><SPAN style="WIDOWS: 2; TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; FONT-VARIANT: normal; FONT-STYLE: normal; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; FONT-FAMILY: Simsun; WHITE-SPACE: normal; ORPHANS: 2; LETTER-SPACING: normal; COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-SIZE: 18px; FONT-WEIGHT: bold; WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><BR><FONT color=white size=4>（１）首句平起入平韵式</FONT></SPAN></FONT><FONT color=yellow><SPAN style="WIDOWS: 2; TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; FONT-VARIANT: normal; FONT-STYLE: normal; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; FONT-FAMILY: Simsun; WHITE-SPACE: normal; ORPHANS: 2; LETTER-SPACING: normal; COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-SIZE: 18px; FONT-WEIGHT: bold; WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><BR><FONT color=yellow size=4><FONT color=red>平</FONT>平<FONT color=red>仄</FONT>仄仄平平，<FONT color=red>仄</FONT>仄平平<FONT color=red>仄</FONT>仄平。</FONT></SPAN><BR style="WIDOWS: 2; TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; FONT-VARIANT: normal; FONT-STYLE: normal; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; FONT-FAMILY: Simsun; WHITE-SPACE: normal; ORPHANS: 2; LETTER-SPACING: normal; COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-SIZE: 15px; FONT-WEIGHT: normal; WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><FONT size=5><SPAN style="WIDOWS: 2; TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; FONT-VARIANT: normal; FONT-STYLE: normal; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; FONT-FAMILY: Simsun; WHITE-SPACE: normal; ORPHANS: 2; LETTER-SPACING: normal; COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-SIZE: 18px; FONT-WEIGHT: bold; WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><FONT color=yellow><FONT color=red>仄</FONT>仄<FONT color=red>平</FONT>平平仄仄，<FONT color=red>平</FONT>平<FONT color=red>仄</FONT>仄仄平平。</FONT></SPAN><BR style="WIDOWS: 2; TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; FONT-VARIANT: normal; FONT-STYLE: normal; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; FONT-FAMILY: Simsun; WHITE-SPACE: normal; ORPHANS: 2; LETTER-SPACING: normal; COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-SIZE: 15px; FONT-WEIGHT: normal; WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"></FONT><SPAN style="WIDOWS: 2; TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; FONT-VARIANT: normal; FONT-STYLE: normal; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; FONT-FAMILY: Simsun; WHITE-SPACE: normal; ORPHANS: 2; LETTER-SPACING: normal; COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-SIZE: 18px; FONT-WEIGHT: bold; WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><BR><FONT color=white size=4>（２）首句平起不入平韵式</FONT></SPAN><BR style="WIDOWS: 2; TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; FONT-VARIANT: normal; FONT-STYLE: normal; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; FONT-FAMILY: Simsun; WHITE-SPACE: normal; ORPHANS: 2; LETTER-SPACING: normal; COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-SIZE: 15px; FONT-WEIGHT: normal; WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><SPAN style="WIDOWS: 2; TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; FONT-VARIANT: normal; FONT-STYLE: normal; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; FONT-FAMILY: Simsun; WHITE-SPACE: normal; ORPHANS: 2; LETTER-SPACING: normal; COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-SIZE: 18px; FONT-WEIGHT: bold; WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><FONT size=4><FONT color=yellow><FONT color=red>平</FONT>平<FONT color=red>仄</FONT>仄平平仄，<FONT color=red>仄</FONT>仄平平<FONT color=red>仄</FONT>仄平。</FONT><BR></FONT></SPAN><FONT size=5><SPAN style="WIDOWS: 2; TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; FONT-VARIANT: normal; FONT-STYLE: normal; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; FONT-FAMILY: Simsun; WHITE-SPACE: normal; ORPHANS: 2; LETTER-SPACING: normal; COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-SIZE: 18px; FONT-WEIGHT: bold; WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><FONT color=yellow><FONT color=red>仄</FONT>仄<FONT color=red>平</FONT>平平仄仄，<FONT color=red>平</FONT>平<FONT color=red>仄</FONT>仄仄平平。</FONT><BR></SPAN><BR style="WIDOWS: 2; TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; FONT-VARIANT: normal; FONT-STYLE: normal; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; FONT-FAMILY: Simsun; WHITE-SPACE: normal; ORPHANS: 2; LETTER-SPACING: normal; COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-SIZE: 15px; FONT-WEIGHT: normal; WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"></FONT><SPAN style="WIDOWS: 2; TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; FONT-VARIANT: normal; FONT-STYLE: normal; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; FONT-FAMILY: Simsun; WHITE-SPACE: normal; ORPHANS: 2; LETTER-SPACING: normal; COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-SIZE: 18px; FONT-WEIGHT: bold; WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><FONT size=4><FONT color=white>（３）首句仄起入平韵式</FONT></FONT></SPAN><FONT color=yellow><SPAN style="WIDOWS: 2; TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; FONT-VARIANT: normal; FONT-STYLE: normal; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; FONT-FAMILY: Simsun; WHITE-SPACE: normal; ORPHANS: 2; LETTER-SPACING: normal; COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-SIZE: 18px; FONT-WEIGHT: bold; WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><BR><FONT color=yellow size=4><FONT color=red>仄</FONT>仄平平<FONT color=red>仄</FONT>仄平，<FONT color=red>平</FONT>平<FONT color=red>仄</FONT>仄仄平平。<BR></FONT></SPAN></FONT><SPAN style="WIDOWS: 2; TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; FONT-VARIANT: normal; FONT-STYLE: normal; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; FONT-FAMILY: Simsun; WHITE-SPACE: normal; ORPHANS: 2; LETTER-SPACING: normal; COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-SIZE: 18px; FONT-WEIGHT: bold; WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><FONT color=yellow size=4><FONT color=red>平</FONT>平<FONT color=red>仄</FONT>仄平平仄，<FONT color=red>仄</FONT>仄平平<FONT color=red>仄</FONT>仄平。<BR></FONT></SPAN><SPAN style="WIDOWS: 2; TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; FONT-VARIANT: normal; FONT-STYLE: normal; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; FONT-FAMILY: Simsun; WHITE-SPACE: normal; ORPHANS: 2; LETTER-SPACING: normal; COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-SIZE: 18px; FONT-WEIGHT: bold; WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><FONT color=yellow><BR></FONT><FONT color=white size=4>（４）首句仄起不入平韵式</FONT></SPAN></FONT><FONT color=yellow><SPAN style="WIDOWS: 2; TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; FONT-VARIANT: normal; FONT-STYLE: normal; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; FONT-FAMILY: Simsun; WHITE-SPACE: normal; ORPHANS: 2; LETTER-SPACING: normal; COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-SIZE: 18px; FONT-WEIGHT: bold; WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><FONT color=yellow><BR><FONT size=4><FONT color=red>仄</FONT>仄<FONT color=red>平</FONT>平平仄仄，<FONT color=red>平</FONT>平<FONT color=red>仄</FONT>仄仄平平。</FONT></FONT><BR></SPAN><FONT size=5><SPAN style="WIDOWS: 2; TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; FONT-VARIANT: normal; FONT-STYLE: normal; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; FONT-FAMILY: Simsun; WHITE-SPACE: normal; ORPHANS: 2; LETTER-SPACING: normal; COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-SIZE: 18px; FONT-WEIGHT: bold; WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><FONT color=yellow><FONT color=red>平</FONT>平<FONT color=red>仄</FONT>仄平平仄，<FONT color=red>仄</FONT>仄平平<FONT color=red>仄</FONT>仄平。</FONT></SPAN><BR style="WIDOWS: 2; TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; FONT-VARIANT: normal; FONT-STYLE: normal; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; FONT-FAMILY: Simsun; WHITE-SPACE: normal; ORPHANS: 2; LETTER-SPACING: normal; COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-SIZE: 15px; FONT-WEIGHT: normal; WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"></FONT></FONT><FONT color=white><SPAN style="WIDOWS: 2; TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; FONT-VARIANT: normal; FONT-STYLE: normal; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; FONT-FAMILY: Simsun; WHITE-SPACE: normal; ORPHANS: 2; LETTER-SPACING: normal; COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-SIZE: 18px; FONT-WEIGHT: bold; WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><BR><FONT color=cyan size=5 face=黑体>[仄韵七绝二式]</FONT></SPAN></FONT><FONT color=yellow><SPAN style="WIDOWS: 2; TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; FONT-VARIANT: normal; FONT-STYLE: normal; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; FONT-FAMILY: Simsun; WHITE-SPACE: normal; ORPHANS: 2; LETTER-SPACING: normal; COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-SIZE: 18px; FONT-WEIGHT: bold; WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><FONT color=white face=宋体><BR><BR><FONT size=4>平起式</FONT></FONT></SPAN></FONT><FONT color=white><SPAN style="WIDOWS: 2; TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; FONT-VARIANT: normal; FONT-STYLE: normal; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; FONT-FAMILY: Simsun; WHITE-SPACE: normal; ORPHANS: 2; LETTER-SPACING: normal; COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-SIZE: 18px; FONT-WEIGHT: bold; WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><FONT color=white><FONT color=yellow><BR></FONT></FONT><FONT color=yellow size=4>平平仄仄平平仄，仄仄平平平仄仄；<BR></FONT></SPAN></FONT><FONT color=white><SPAN style="WIDOWS: 2; TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; FONT-VARIANT: normal; FONT-STYLE: normal; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; FONT-FAMILY: Simsun; WHITE-SPACE: normal; ORPHANS: 2; LETTER-SPACING: normal; COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-SIZE: 18px; FONT-WEIGHT: bold; WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><FONT size=4><FONT color=yellow><FONT color=yellow>仄仄平平仄仄平</FONT>，平平仄仄平平仄。<BR></FONT></FONT></SPAN></FONT><SPAN style="WIDOWS: 2; TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; FONT-VARIANT: normal; FONT-STYLE: normal; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; FONT-FAMILY: Simsun; WHITE-SPACE: normal; ORPHANS: 2; LETTER-SPACING: normal; COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-SIZE: 18px; FONT-WEIGHT: bold; WORD-SPACING: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px"><BR><FONT color=white size=4>仄起式</FONT></SPAN></P><SPAN style="WIDOWS: 2; TEXT-TRANSFORM: none; FONT-VARIANT: normal; FONT-STYLE: normal; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; FONT-FAMILY: Simsun; WHITE-SPACE: normal; ORPHANS: 2; LETTER-SPACING: normal; COLOR: rgb(0,0,0); FONT-SIZE: 18px; FONT-WEIGHT: bold; 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<P align=center><FONT size=4>平平仄仄仄平平，仄仄平平平仄仄。<BR></FONT><FONT color=cyan size=4><BR>注：<FONT color=red>红</FONT>色字体表示可平可仄。<BR>仄韵可平可仄可参照平韵式。<BR>仅供参考。<BR><BR></FONT><IMG style="MAX-WIDTH: 400px" border=0 src="http://www.keai99.com/data/attachment/album/201109/02/140918tddu41zzed4b2z7k.gif"><BR></P></FONT></SPAN></FONT>
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扬州爱莲闲人

平仄和押韵需略作调整，“挂”是仄声字，用新韵匆匆试调一下。
雨打荷塘乱叶花，
朦胧月色挂天涯。
蛙声十里歌不断，
灯火阑珊有客家。

华北李中

版主辛苦了，谢谢您的讲座。

扬州爱莲闲人

华北李中 发表于 2014-7-10 13:57
版主辛苦了，谢谢您的讲座。

谢谢先生！问好！

笔耕

收藏慢慢学习消化！贤弟辛苦！

扬州爱莲闲人

笔耕 发表于 2014-7-10 16:27
收藏慢慢学习消化！贤弟辛苦！

就那个形式，其他没什么，闲人涂鸦更不值一提。

笔耕

扬州爱莲闲人 发表于 2014-7-10 16:30
就那个形式，其他没什么，闲人涂鸦更不值一提。

越有知识的人越谦虚！读弟一首诗，胜读十日书！深入浅出，直观易懂，不简单啊！

汉茂油桃

扬州爱莲闲人 发表于 2014-7-10 13:46
平仄和押韵需略作调整，“挂”是仄声字，用新韵匆匆试调一下。
雨打荷塘乱叶花，
朦胧月色挂天涯。

老师改得好！